Feedback - Miss Spencer

Representation feedback

you have covered the basics of representation - looking at the main area of gender, there is also some excellent detailed research into the history of the genre. You have linked this well to the representation of gender.
In order to improve you should look at how this will influence your own film.
Level 3

Target audience feedback - you have done some good secondary research - don't forget to always credit your sources. There is some break down into target groups but this needs to be more detailed. We are going to look at this in class to help everyone improve. Level 2

Genre research feedback - Excellent and detaile dresearch. I would just like to see some discussion of iconography, characterisation and setting to improve this further.
Level 3 (Low) adding the above would take this much higher.