Tuesday, 30 September 2014

Feedback - Miss Spencer

This is a great start to your blog Ellie, you have obviously worked hard to get a variety of film analysis done and added a good deal of detail. However you do need to do a little more to get comfortably into a level 3.

To help you improve you should:
  • Embed the film opening into each blog post
  • Add more detail to your writing, for example you say in the Woman in Black analysis that the room looks old fashioned, but no comment as to why they have set it in this time. I would suggest that the Victorian period, and especially a children's nursery is a classic horror setting and therefore a convention of horror. Go through your work adding more comment as to WHY remembering to discuss and point out conventions. (this will help with your film opening planning too!)
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3 comments:

  1. Unknown12 October 2014 at 03:49

    I have embedded the film openings in the blog posts where i can find the opening scene on youtube and i have added more detail to all my posts.

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  2. Unknown13 October 2014 at 01:55

    Well done Ellie, I realise you have a couple of issues finding films that you can embed, but make sure you have plenty of screen shots if you don't have the film link.

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  3. Unknown20 October 2014 at 05:18

    How many more screenshots would i have to include to get up to a level 3?

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