Wednesday, 18 March 2015

Coursework feedback


Research and Planning – 16
Excellent organisation of actors, locations etc with a detailed schedule, risk assessment etc. All recce’s complete and detailed as well. I would have liked to see a more detailed script. The script is simple but effective, but lacks the sound detail. Research into similar products is extensive and proficient, sometimes moving into excellent. The work on target audience is a little lacking in depth, but does cover some interesting areas of demographics, and is applied to her own work. There is a good level of care in presentation and time management was excellent.
Main Task – 53
This is a challenging film that tackles delicate issues and questions of representation. They have chosen to go along conventional stereotypical male aggressor/female victim lines. There is good continuity throughout, and the cross cutting is interesting and effective. Close attention has been paid to the location, make-up etc and the casting is impressive. The sound has been built up into an interesting sound scape through the use of found and created sound. There is no dialogue, however the voice over guides us and this follows conventions of many film openings of this genre. There is a good variety of shots and the titles follow conventions closely.